The Script

So yea.. I've finished the script, but I currently don't have ink on my printer, so I'll just copy what I did here. It's not going to be proper spacing, indentation, size and everything, but it will be on the hard copy, so just bear with me for now. At least I've posted the script hehe.

Director: Zhanyne Dulaogon
Story Editor: Zhanyne Dulaogon






REVENGE OF THE CUDDLY BEST FRIEND





Written
by
Zhanyne Dulaogon




1st Draft: 29/1/11
2nd Draft: 1/2/11

FADE IN:

1. EXT. HOUSE. DAY

In front of a house, with birds chirping and all is perfectly peaceful.SFX: BIRDS CHIRPING. Then suddenly, a loud cheering is heard SFX: YAAAY! and the house is shaken a little. SFX: CRASH INSIDE THE HOUSE AND BIRDS FLYING AWAY.PUSH IN.

2. INT. ROOM. DAY

PARENTS are seen handing REVS, a bear stuffed toy to their daughter, Rae, who was jumping up and down in excitement.

CLOSE ON REVS

Shows Rev’s smiling face and shining golden fur.

CLOSE ON RAE

Rae smiles widely while hugging Revs tightly.

RAE
(Excited, jumps up and down)
Woooow! A present! You’re my new best friend now!

BACK IN ROOM

Rae walks to the right and disappears.

3. INT. HALLWAY

Rae stands in front of a room with a bed, a desk beside it and a window at the right. Bookshelves are at the wall and other stuffed toys are seated on it.

RAE
(With an evil grin)
Welcome!

4. INT. RAE’S ROOM

Rae’s back faces the camera. SFX: HUMMING.

RAE
You look so pretty!

CLOSE ON REVS’ FACE

He has a smile on his face but a vein popped on the right side of his forehead.

RAE (V/O)
You’re gonna look prettier after this!

Another vein popped on his forehead, but on the left side.

BACK IN RAE’S ROOM

Rae’s back faces the camera again…

RAE
There! Tada!

…and moves away. Revs is sitting down wearing a pink fluffy princess’ dress with two big circles on his cheeks, pink eye shadow and red uneven lipstick. SFX: SHUFFLES.

CLOSE ON REVS’ FACE

Revs visibly shudder when he saw his reflection, and another vein popped on his forehead again, with an eyebrow twitching.

SCREEN INTERLUDE

White background with three dots appears.

5. INT. LVING ROOM

RAE

is standing up with a smile of her face, and she lifts her arm up and down, and we hear a thud every time her arm goes down. SFX: THUD.

BACK IN THE LIVING ROOM

Rae bangs Revs on the table joyfully. She stops and grabs Revs with two hands, and proceeds to shake him.

CLOSE ON REVS

His eyes turn swirly from dizziness.

6. INT. RAE’S ROOM. MORNING

CLOSE ON REV’S FACE

Revs’ left eyebrow twitches in annoyance. SFX: MUNCHING.

RAE (V/O)
Mmmmm…

Then a hand with a jelly bean appears in front of his face.

RAE (V/O)
Want some?

Revs’ eyes became shiny.

CLOSE ON RAE

Rae blinks and smiles evilly. She leans forward…

BACK TO REVS

His eyes getting shinier…

BACK TO RAE

… and pops the jelly bean into her mouth. She closes her eyes in mock delight to make Revs jealous.

BACK TO REVS

Three veins popped on his forehead.

REVS’ THOUGHTS: his eyes turn red in anger and he has an evil smile on his face.

WIDER ON REVS’ THOUGHTS

The background is black with the middle part flaming orange. Revs’ eyes are glinting. He punches his right fist to his left hand, planning to take revenge.

7. INT. RAE’S ROOM. NIGHT

In the darkness of the room, yellow eyes suddenly appear followed by an evil grin. A shiny spark appears SFX: TINGG! somewhere near the eyes and SFX: SCRIBBLES can be heard.

8. INT. FRIDGE. DAWN

CLOSE UP ON THE FRIDGE

The fridge is slightly open with light peeking out. SFX: FRIDGE RATTLING. The rustling inside stops and Revs peeks out his head.

CLOSE ON REVS

His head is moving slowly away from the fridge, his eyes looking for any signs of being caught. He walks away from the fridge, a bag of jelly beans in his left hand.

9. INT. RAE’S ROOM. DAWN

Revs laid out a few jackstones at the foot of Rae’s bed, and puts a skateboard near it. SFX: EVIL LAUGH. He pulls out a piece of paper from somewhere and scribbles on it. SFX: SCRIBBLES. Proud of his work, he does a move of success before climbing up the window and jumping to the tree next to it. SFX: LEAVES RUSTLING.

10. EXT. TREE. MORNING

Revs is sleeping SFX: SNORING. He then later hears a SFX: SCREAM, CRASH, BUMP and other noises inside the room.

RAE (V/O)
Owwww… What’s this??
My teddy hates meee!

Revs sits comfortable against the tree trunk and eats his jelly beans. And the scene goes black, but forms a circle showing his happy face.

11. INT. RAE’S ROOM. MORNING

The scene shows the piece of paper sprawled on the floor, with the writing that says, “Treat your toys with more respect, or we’ll all run away from you!” and the scene goes…

BLACK

The end

*I'd probably post a copy of my script once I get ink so yea... And I'll post the scans of the booklet tomorrow as well. xD Nearly done though, just missing the timeframes and the walk cycle.